Showing posts with label lament. Show all posts
Showing posts with label lament. Show all posts

Friday, September 25, 2026

will praying in Haiku produce a gated drum effect?






One of my favorite poets and persons (and cousins) is Ed Brickell.

I particularly admire his craft with Haiku.

I remember how when Peter Gabriel was recording his third album, he strictly enforced the discipline of "no cymbals." 

Ironically (or not), the album became the genesis (pun intended) of the revolutionary "gated drum" sound which eventually went hugely viral with the iconic and accidental  (in both senses of the term) "In the Air Tonight" drum fill on Phil Collins' first solo album.

Having worked previously with Eno (the "Enossification" effects on Genesis' "Lamb Lies Down on Broadway" album), Gabriel may well have been inspired by Eno's "oblique strategies" of forbidding certain instruments or chords in songs, to see what unsolicited creativity would happen in the dare of the  discipline (see "Oblique Strategies")


Maybe Ed and other haikuists (heck, any artists, which includes everyone reading) can chime in:

What have you learned about/from forcing yourself to work within certain structures and limits? How has limiting the palette opened up liminal and larger space..and thin places?

As a heteroclite theologian who is ever  
Pushing Toward The Unobvious..

 I also wonder/wander if in works of art pondering the divine, what unique anointing there is in limiting the palette and downsizing the arsenal/toolbox of words and wineskins.


I wonder how Ed's being a Zen practioner shapes the form and content of his art?

What might I learn about God, life and myself if I write/voice  my theologizing (laments, midrash and "reversed thunder")  prayers in Haiku?


I will find out soon..even if Anne Lammott's famous maxim about first drafts comes true.  One of these days, like Dave  the Zen Presbyterian, I can pray through guitar.  But before that, I will experiment with praying in the glossolalia of Haiku.

What would McLuhan say here?

Here is a Haiku (a HAIKU TRILOGY, no less, I like 3s) from late Methodist pastor Cynthia Langston Kirk , and a poem from Ed which pique my holy curiosity..

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Lines in the sand

Deaths in the Sonoran desert

Divine lament

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Child sentenced to death

Dying slowly in Auschwitz

God on the gallows

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Rage upon anger

Exploded in Virginia Tech'

Come Holy Comfort

-Cynthia Langston Kirk, p, 102 in this book

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Big Storm 

 

The dark in the west is deep -  

A rogue chunk of night  

Drifting like an iceberg. 

. 

The breeze, spiced with damp earth. 

Wind chimes blunder into each other. 

Thunder roots in the edges. 

 

Close behind this Gotterdammerung 

The sky turns a page of blue - 

A disappointing novel, 

Read in a single glance. 

 

 by Ed Brickell





Wednesday, June 10, 2026

U2 's Easter Lilly E.P: Oh, #$!!, surprising sunrises, prophetic parades, the Matrix Trainman in Limbo, coexisting in grief, stealing a Bible verse back from TBN

                                "Oh, #*#!, it's really true!"




Many mornings in the weeks and months after my wife Sonya died, the sun shining through the window would wake me up, For the first few moments finding my consciousness, I was content: becoming oriented to the opportunities of a new day.

Then, inevitably, I remembered.

                        Oh, she's dead.

Wait, really? Was it just a dream?


"Oh, #*#!, it's really true!," I actually said aloud more than once.

They joke there are two types of people:

                       those who say "Good morning, Lord!" and those who say "Good Lord, it's morning!"


On most days I was both; finding a way for both to coexist in the same space, soul and morning/mourning.

But I am getting ahead of myself..


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Seven years later, I woke up I woke  and oriented myself to the fact that it was day.

And Good Friday, at that. A day always laden and loaded with grief over the death of Jesus, and the joy of the resurrection not far off.

The "Oh, #!@$! , it's real" morning surprises  were no longer a regular occurrence. I am not the same since she left; but I am happily remarried

I grabbed my phone, ostensibly to check the time or secure a morning devotion, but more likely to check Facebook...and found notification of a new U2 song.

"Song for Hal," it said. As I began playing it, the soundscapes escaped ; some classic and exciting new Edge "swirling epiphanies" emerged..

The vocals began. They were good, but something wasn't quite right; not quote Bono. Had I been fooled by AI?

No, it was the Edge on lead vocals..


Unlike most U2 releases of the past, I was not prepared for a new song by my favorite band. I had  usually read the lyrics and maybe even reviews/forum comments..


But this time I had no idea what the song was bout, let alone who the hal Hal was. Let alone that it was about.

                           Full immersion


 And as the morning light       Stretches out across the floor

 Can't believe it's another day And life goes on like it did before


What? Were Bono and Edge reading my memory?

My mail and my mind?

It wouldn't be the first time.


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To switch gears to the task at hand..

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To quote a book title that can be well-applied to personal journey/spiritual life:  the "What to Expect While You are Expecting " principle is relevant here.

 For one, we are all spiritually expecting, just ask Pastor Jack H (and my other favorite Pastor Jack H).

Two, I was not even  expecting to expect  two EPs  ("Days of Ash" and "Easter Lilly"),

 let alone one;

                let alone two great ones; 

from U2 this year  before the full-blown  album later this year.  

Two albums (three releases) in their 50th year?  And two (three?) that follow the liturgical calendar?

God is in the house. The lads are pregnant.

I consider the two surprise EPs as one whole; two sides of an album/coin/life posture. The band have spoken clearly about the first volume being more angry, political.. and lament-laden, and the sequel more personal and hope-filled .......as we are expectant of the "defiant joy" of the album to come,

To be expectant in U2 fandom is also to expect anxiety that the album this fall won't live up to these EPs. The worst fear is they partly lose the plot/baby. Me genoito,  I hope Jacknife Lee is right!


I like these two EPs  both very much ; especially the second, so I am writing about it today..


I won't write much, as I can't add much to...but can amen much to.... these great reviews that I  recommend and will reference:


I am so sad that Steve Harmon's book had to go to press without a chapter on Easter Lilly!

I will only major on three songs here, as I have observations, connections and questions.

It seems unpardonable to not write about the other three songs, as they form an amazing grace sound ; the death and resurrection trilogy. Don't get me started on "Scars," which may well be in my top five U2 songs already (Not bad for a late career E.P.)

But I  want to start by calling attention to  two intriguing  structural observations on the EP as a whole (as an artwork); and then give a few heteroclitic and maybe unobvious comments and questions on each song.

 

1) An inclusio of sunrise language; especially  being surprised by the sunrise.  Cheesy as it might be if another band adopted it , it is clear that in the U2 dictionary, "sun" is often code/standing in for Son (Jesus). Drawing the fish in the sand,  Here the focus on sunrise/Sonrise : fitting for an EP with Easter in the title.

Here is that inclusio:

-First song "Song for Hal". 

  And as the morning light       Stretches out across the floor

 Can't believe it's another day And life goes on like it did before

-Last song: "COEXIST (I Will Bless The Lord At All Times?) 


Every night we hope and pray for a new day to rise
Every morning when the sun shows up, it's still a surprise


And, as often with inclusios (and chiasms) , the term often shows up in the middle (more or less) of the narrative. Thus, in the song "Easter Parade,' 


Every night we hope and pray for a new day to rise
Every morning when the sun shows up, it's still a surprise



2) An inclusio  of  the word/image "parade.'


First song "Song for Hal"


Then in "COEXIST (I Will Bless The Lord At All Times?)  the ;last song:


Changes, these changes
Will rain on this parade


Wherever the strange is on paradeWherever the music is madeYou'll be there

=


in "Easter Parade,' of course, the whole song is the parade.

Changes, these changes
Will rain on this parade
Changes, these changes
I am not afraid


Then in "/COEXIST (I Will Bless The Lord At All Times?)  

Changes, these changes
Will rain on this parade


I love how PJ PJ DeGenaro matter of factly felt this, nd took the liberty to make the inclusio explicit , amd  import the word "Easter" when the parade shows up in "Coexist". Yes!

'The changes will rain on our (Easter) parade" (link)



And, as often with inclusios (and chiasms) , the term often shows up in the middle (more or less) of the narrative. Thus, in the song "Easter Parade,' of course, the whole song is the parade.

What is "Easter Lilly" about?  The surprising and subversive sunrise and prophetic and poignant parade that springs forth from death.


Heck, maybe the original song "Easter :Parade" sung by Judy Garlad to Fred Astaire  is a bit about that, too:

On the avenue, Fifth Avenue
The photographers will snap us
And you'll find that you're in the rotogravure
Oh, I could write a sonnet about your Easter bonnet
And of the guy I'm taking to the Easter parade

Inclusio and chiasm are,  with or  without the   writer being fully aware of embedding these structures, reveal quite a lot about the overall meaning/message of a  work.  Don't get me started on Bible inclusio and chiasm. But I could get started up  here or here, LOL,. As Mick Jagger sang...

Alos, I note that every song (or almost every song  on "Easter Lilly" ends with an outro or coda/last section.. that changes gears. I am sure there is a term  for this in musical composition/theory.  Instead of  fadeout or repetition/reprise of a chorus, or an improv/scat/glossolalia/Bongolese ending (As in "Still Haven't Found".. a whole new thematic world opens up. 

My favorite example here is "In a Life" ...which nods to a Peter Gabriel lyric (see 40:08  in video here to learn that is (in part) about God)..
And how about the final note of "Coexist." There are different theories about what it means: a nod to the ending of the "Zooropa" album, an  exclamation point on the album. a "more to come" teaser,. A requirement to say Edge played on the song...


Let's return to "Song for Hal," which  now know is a response to death of the band's friend, Hal.

In a way it is my "Song for Sonya."


I often play on shuffle, but even more than other U2 releases, it would seem blasphemy to consider any other intended running order of the Easter Lilly tracks. As Bono mentioned (quoting Dalai Lama)  in the book accompanying "Atomic Bomb,'  "To meditate on life, start with death."



-Question for fans and followers (Edge, I know you are reading, lol): In the opening lyrics

Did you hear "Forever"?
Was it playing soft and low?
It's not a song you wanna hear
If you're not ready to go

 Is the song "Forever"  a specific actual song, or just an image? Here are some internet  guessed.. Many suggest it is just a symbol of the afterlife; but I am still haunted by the way it is mentioned as if an actual song


Gregory Daujat in his free Kindle book on Easter Lilly says the point of “Song for Hal” is that “even the dead are not alone.”


Megan nails it:
The promise “You’re not alone” ,not in the “bright blue air,” not if your “voice is unheard,”sets the tone of accompaniment in grief and trouble, which runs throughout the EP. -link

Note also a possible connection binding the two EPS. The last song on the first EP declares "
"You are not alone."

Watch this..Now to he first song on the next EP (or if you consider the two as one album, the very next song!

 The repetitive “I feel alone,” conflicts with the refrain “you’re not alone” in “Song For Hal.” The personal confession of aloneness is raw — can’t see the forest despite the trees sort of thing. Here is a personal song about friendship, but he feels alone. Is it an emotional disconnect that’s being alluded to? Could it be that he feels that God hasn’t been with him? Bono did find himself   calling out to God during his brush with death and he didn’t hear Him -link


"IN A LIFE"

The second song, "In a :Life", per the Edge's comments in Propaganda, and per the clear content of the official music vireo, is about the friendship of the band over the year.

OK....but I don't hear that...at all.

I was already with Megan  on this l even  before I read her post

It is valuable to quote Megan's full comment on the song, as it radically  resonated with me. 

The song that follows feels like a cross between the underworld and purgatory. Strongly connected to Bono’s Stories of Surrender, it uses the London Underground as a kind of in between space. The repeated fare/coin imagery evokes Charon’s crossing or the purchase of indulgences. It begins with “I’ll meet you in the air… with the fare,” and the person is met “in the empty space that occupies your place.” The looping percussion and guitar during the Circle Line section accentuates the feeling of circling until one learns what they need for passage into the next life. These lessons are both relational and communal and include the futility of ignoring God’s instruction, ”You’re kicking the pricks,: an archaic form of goads, which references Acts 26, and the need to surrender. There is a driver on the train of this circle that notes how the “souls are in so much pain,” which possibly may be the wounded healer Christ presented in Scars. Only confession , both corporate (“when we make our bed out of war”) and personal (“I never achieved anything on my own”), breaks the loop. The song ends with grace: “A skipping stone I was thrown, the ocean floor is not my home.” and gratitude, “I only received from being shown.” and leads us to the encounter in the song that follows. link


Instead of Charon (a fantastic connection, and it reminds me not to miss potential lyrical connections to paintings, as in the Mephisto "Checkmate' painting (see this) 

UNOBVIOUSLY..I thought of  the Trainman  in Matrix Reloaded , who  lives in the subway/underground, 


headquartered at "Mobil Station "
 (Mobil is an anagram for limbo? the writers did that on purpose) , and seems doomed to keep riding the trains in a purgatorial state . He wears multiple watches (hmm . note the song lyrics 'And when we stop the clocks stopping time ) The name of the train is Loop, symbolizing a loop in time or endless cycle of limbo

And when we stop the clocks stopping time ” and jumps to the other side of the platform He is in charge of Mobil Station (Mobil is an anagram for limbo:the writers did that on purpose). The name of the train is Loop, symbolizing a loop in time or endless cycle of limbo. See  ("I am a strange christian loop")

 

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Driver on the train is Jesus, Megan?  Yes, thank you. Again, i had somehow not seen that..
"Meet you in the air" is classically connected to the dispensational theory of the rapture I (1Thess 4:17 literally says "meeting Christ in the air" and this was I  think a doctrine of Shalom, too ) that it seemed to me certain he meant that..
Bono has even written in "Ahimsa":
" I'll meet you where the sky is torn
I’ll meet you in the air
I’ll meet you before the world was born"

Anyone with conservagelical heritage knows this excahnge:


"See you later"
"Here, there or in the air"


  14 For isince we believe that Jesus died and rose again, even so, through Jesus, God will bring with him jthose who have fallen asleep. 15 For this we declare to you kby a word from the Lord,4 that lwe who are alive, who are left until mthe coming of the Lord, will not precede those who have fallen asleep. 16 For nthe Lord himself will descend ofrom heaven pwith a cry of command, with the voice of qan archangel, and rwith the sound of the trumpet of God. And sthe dead in Christ will rise first. 17 Then we who are alive, who are left, will be tcaught up together with them uin the clouds to meet the Lord in the air, and so vwe will always be with the Lord. 18 Therefore encourage one another with these words. -1 Thess 4

or  as Bono riffs on it : "Meet you in the air..or in the underground."

Also:
                      now i wonder..
My question: “to wake up an unforgiving son” ..
what
Does that mean to you ?
Of course the brother of prodigal son comes to mind.
The line could mean “to wake up someone who is an unforgiving son” or “to wake up as a forgiving son”...
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 On to:

"COEXIST: I Will Bless the Lord at All Times.


First a quick question. In the flurry of fan comments  when the song first appeared. there was  discussion about  who is the "Girl Of Guadaloop"
Of course, it is likely primarily  the Virgin of Guadalupe.

But why her, and why does she how up here?
And Pat Washington evem wondered if  Girl was thjs  other girl  here,... who Bono would obviously admire.  LOL. But her name doesn't rhyme with "book"...though neither does "Guadaloop," for that matter 



Also..

If you are reading this far, you will surely remember Bono saying as he introduces "Helter  Skelter"  in "Rattle and Hum "This is a song Charles Manson stole from the Beatles? We're stealing it back"


This chilling song redeems or buys back some bad memories I have of the old TBN network.

Paul and Jan Crouch sometimes hosted some guests that I was interested in seeing..

But their campy  creepiness often  buggd me..let alone the scandals that ultimately came out.

Paul routinely  opened their flagship  show  with an overly enthusiastic quoting /cheerleading of this  same Scripture:

“I will bless the Lord at all times and His praise will continually be on my lips.”

And Bono's now bought/brought  it back from me.

From now on this Scripture  will  be voiced by Bono and the  U2 song, not the



TBN theme song

PTL!...to risk quoting  another controversial  televangelist show/


Finally:

One mystery : All  U2 fans know  what COEXIST means, and Bono's history with the  motto and headband/blindfold. But what does that have to do with the song's story Why is this in the title and nowhere in the lyric?

Ken Penner has as a suggested answer:

The anchor of the song is a vow seized from King David in duress, a stubborn promise to bless the Lord at all times, quoting verbatim “I will bless the LORD at all times: his praise shall continually be in my mouth” (Psalm 34:1, KJV). This is praise spoken through gritted teeth, and the COEXIST title frames that struggle with what Bono called a “powerful symbol of tolerance,” an attempt to imagine common ground when human rights feel under siege in the aftermath of 9/11. -Ken Penner

But  Brian Zahnd has an  additional (final?) answer, and

he may well be right! I haven't seen anyone suggest this. but I love the "obvious unobvious" .
 Someone ask Bono!


See 16:05 to 20:05 in Zahnd's sermon above.The take home?:


"Can the commitment to bless the Lord at all times COEXIST with the reality of a worldwhere children are killed by down strikes?"


Or to come full circle,  where wives die?


Or dead men don't wake up?
Isn't the ruthless and refreshing honesty of dozens of U2 songs  that  faith and doubt /grief an joy and coexist ? (see  "Bono audio: God at the 9" Nails Gig")

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"Bono sings laments and yearnings as willingly as he sings resolve, peace and joy.' 

-Scott Calhoun, p.5, U2 and the Religious Impulse

Or as Walter Brueggemann, whom Bono quotes and references, has said,. the gospel and a prophet, and :prophetic imagination"  is all about  the coexistent paradox of grief and amazement?

Amazing Grief, how sweet the sound of this graced E.P.



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"Oh #@! It's real!" ..but God is good..

all the time..

             and at all times.

I am learning to  creatively coexist in  the midst, milieux and mess of that.






Thursday, September 25, 2025

lamenting in packs

 



image credit:  from a post by Brian and Peri Zahnd, Laughter and Lament, recommended

From "Crowds and Power," by Canetti, pp.143ff:


The face of the earth has been changed by the religions of lament and, in Christianity, they have attained a kind of universal validity.  What is it then which has endowed them with their power of resistance?  What is it that has procured for these religions originating in lament their peculiar persistence during millennia?

The legend around which they form is that of a man or a god who perishes unjustly. It is always the story of a pursuit, a hunt, or a baiting, and there may   also be an unjust trial. In the case of a hunt, the wrong creature will have been struck down, the foremost hunter instead of the animal which is being pursued.  This animal, in a kind of reversal, may have attacked the hunter and wounded him fatally, as in the story of Adonis and the boar.  This is the one death which should not have taken place, and the grief it arouses is beyond all measure.

It may be that a goddess loves and laments the victim, as Aphrodite Adonis. In her Babylonian shape the goddess’s name is Ishtar, and Tammuz is the beautiful dead youth. Among the Phrygians it is the mother goddess Cybele who grieves for Attis, her young lover. In Egypt it is Isis who has lost her husband Osiris. But it can also happen – and this is the later and no longer mythical case – that a group of relatives and disciples lament the dead, as they do Jesus, or Husain, the Grandson of the Prophet and the true martyr of the Shiites.

The hunt, or pursuit, is pictured in all its details; it is a precise   story, very concrete and personal. Blood always flows; even in the most humane of all Passions, that of Christ himself, we find wounds and blood. Each of the things which compose the Passion is felt to be unjust; the further removed from mythical times, the stronger becomes the tendency to prolong the passion and to fill it out with human details. The hunt, or baiting, is always experienced from the point of view of the victim.

Around his end a lamenting pack forms, but the lament has a particular tone; the dead man has died for the sake of the people who mourn him.  Whether he was their great hunter, or had another and higher value for them, he was their savior. His preciousness is stressed in every possible way; it is he, above all that should not have died.  His death is not recognized by the mourners. They want him alive again.

It begins with the few faithful who stand beneath the cross; they are the kernel of the lament.  At the first Whitsuntide there were possibly 600 Christians; at the time of the Emperor Constantine about 10 million.  But the core of the religion remains the same; it is the lament. Why is it that so many join the lament?  What is its attraction? What does it give people?

To all those who join it the same thing happens: a hunting or baiting pack expiates its guilt by becoming a lamenting pack.  Men lived as pursuers and as such, in their own fashion, they continue to live.  They seek alien flesh, and cut into it, feeding on the torment of weaker creatures; the glazing eye of the victim is mirrored in their eyes, and that last cry they delight in is indelibly recorded in their soul. Most of them perhaps do not divine that, while they feed their bodies, they also feed the darkness within themselves.  But their guilt and fear grow ceaselessly, and, without knowing it, they long for deliverance. Thus they attach themselves to one who will die for them and, in lamenting him, they feel   themselves as persecuted. Whatever they have done, however they have raged, for this moment they are aligned with suffering.  It is a sudden change of side with far-reaching consequences. It frees them from the accumulated guilt of killing and from fear that death will strike at them too. All that they have done to others, another takes on himself; by attaching themselves to him, faithfully and without reserve, they hope to escape vengeance.



Thus it appears that religions of lament will continue to be indispensable to the psychic economy of men for as long as they remain  unable to renounce pack killing.

Of all the traditional religions of lament which could be adduced for doser consideration that of the Islamic Shites is the most illuminating.

The cults of Tammuz and Adonis, of Osiris and Attis are also relevant.

Bat they all belong to the past and are known only from cuneiform or hieroglyphic texts, or from the writings of the classical authors of antiquity, and, though these reports are invaluable, it will be more convincing if we concern ourselves with a faith which still exists today in a living and unweakened form

The most important of all the religions of lament is Christianity, and something will have to be said about it in its Catholic form. But from among the crucial moments of Christianity, the moments of true mass excitement, I propose to choose for description, not a moment of genuine lament, which has become rare, but another: the Feast of the Resurrection in the Church of the Sepulchre in Jerusalem.

Link to entire book as a PDF

Friday, February 12, 2021

the covenant post-Holocaust: "Only a wounded faith is worthy of a silent God"

 


"Children were sometimes burned alive at Auschwitz ..After describing this scene, Rabbi  Greenburg put forward the following proposition: 'No statement,  theological or otherwise, should be made that would not be credible in the presence of burning children.". -Gushee. p. 70, After Evangelicalism

Highly recommended:  read page 76 (and ideally the whole section of pp. 74-81)  of Gushee's  After Evangelicalism (read here) ,where he covers Greenburg's suggestion that  post-Holocaust, for the Jews,  the covenant is no longer in a "commanded stage," but is now voluntary.


"Israel's relation with God has been severely wounded.  Wiesel: ' Only a wounded faith can exist after these events.  Only a wounded faith is worthy of a silent God.'...God no longer has the right to demand covenant loyalty from his people."  -Gushee. p. 76, After Evangelicalism